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Wednesday August 10, 2005

When I open my eyes, here are you


Once the dreams should come true
when i open my eyes and here are you

its difficult to portray my feelings through chat
thats why once this should happen that

i am standing at sea shore in the full moon night
thinking of you and alone singing for you
all of sudden the water in sea gets bright
when i open my eyes and here are you

its difficult to portray my feelings through chat
thats why once this should happen that

i am sitting with my friends and drinking
my heart alone weeping and sinking
i should talk about how much i love you
and then when I open my eyes, here are you

its difficult to portray my feelings through chat
thats why once this should happen that

I am all alone and dejected
as if this world has neglected
I need a shoulder to cry on
and when I open my eyes, here are you

its difficult to portray my feelings through chat
thats why once this should happen that

Posted by Divesh at 10:02 AM
11 Comments

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Comments:

Maya was quick in posting your poem. bet all the girls will cocme back here in a jiffy,wink ;)

Blissful Said on 8/10/2005 11:21:06 AM


I have noticed mayaji has been very prompt in approving poems.. hats off to her..

welcome back diveshji... I am your #1 fan

AtlantaGirl Said on 8/10/2005 11:39:43 AM


Fantastic poem!!

narain2 Said on 8/10/2005 1:01:44 PM


Very nice! Welcome back Divesh.

Soul_Man Said on 8/10/2005 1:27:19 PM


Nice poem. Your break has made you happier it would seem. Good Good.

Sweeties Said on 8/10/2005 2:59:21 PM


Nice Poem Div & welcome back happy :)

Philips Said on 8/10/2005 3:53:21 PM


Good to see you back and writing.

Maya Ahmed Said on 8/11/2005 12:28:19 AM


TIME TO WRITE AN URDU POEM.happy :)

Blissful Said on 8/11/2005 5:57:21 PM


thanks nimms, charu, maya, jpn(sorry i dont know u), ranbir,lins.

sorry mayaji, i was calling u on forums.. i didnt knew that u approved my poem. I was waiting for ur email..

nimms i will write urdu poems for u and tell u on phone.. is that ok..
or if u insist so much i will post it here..

thanks everybody for supporting my comeback.. i am feeling good too, to be between humnrians.. i missed u all..

Divesh Said on 8/11/2005 9:10:52 PM


Good poem Divs & welcome back to u too

Rati Said on 8/14/2005 1:54:23 AM


Nice poem. Excellent work.

Sweeties Said on 9/8/2005 5:55:31 PM